Hi my lovely blog followers! So on my post titled
A Joyful Corner Contest Entry I did the first 2 parts of a new story, these are the next 2 (3+4).
Part
3
By downhill from there I don't mean normal middle school girl
stuff like 'Oh my makeup's smudged! Ella help me!' or 'Oh darn my
book bag split open! Darren! Can you help me?' (that's actually
happened before) no this was bad guy kidnap you kinda bad,
literally. I started moving toward what looked like a little village
and then I was grabbed from behind pinned down on a nearby rock with
someone's (or something's) knee in my back! Let me tell you
that hurts! It started yelling (with a very feminine voice) in a
language I didn't understand (which is odd because I know a lot of
languages) and then some type of cloth went up to my face and the
world went black.
Part
4
Black
as night, black as coal, if I sprinkled glitter on it, it could be
the night sky. If it was the night sky I could be laying outside
trying to go to sleep. If only I hadn't decided to go to the village.
Now that I think about it, I don't remember that being
on any of the maps. I was so stupid! Stupid, stupid, stupid. If it's
possible to think while being knocked out those were the thoughts
drifting through my head at that point. Then I was jostled out of my
peaceful sleep.
“What” I had mumbled as if my kidnapper would care. The same
female voice as earlier started yelling in that language I didn't
know. “Okay, first off, I don't know a thing
you're saying! Second, you gotta learn how to treat your kidnapees
with more respect! We don't like being pinned down, knocked out, and
woken up from our unpleasant sleep, so yeah!” I totally told her
off! “Oh” she said “You speak Wisterian.” she said (in
perfect Wisterian)
with no expression. “Yeah! I am
Wisterian!”
I said. Slowly I realized that I was stuck to the wall with… Duck
Tape? “You don't want to tell the chief that, it's a death sentence
here.” the woman said. Umm… Okay? I had thought, whats the guy
got against Wisterians? “Um… Yeah your gonna have to explain
what I'm doing here but first, you need to take the Duck Tape off me,
I can't concentrate with it stuck on.” I said, half telling a lie
half the truth. “If you get unstuck then you'll have to go to the
dungeon,
but the dungeon's not that bad. I'd prefer
the dungeon too.”she replied then shifted uncomfortably
then came over and took the Duck Tape off. I started walking in the
way she pointed and she pointed
her finger at me! (That's considered rude in the fairy dimension
because it symbolizes that you're about to use magic on someone.)
So? How'd you like these next 2? I hope somebody actually comments on if they like it or not!!!
Officially only 10 more days till Christmas! Ahh! So excited!
Bye Sincerely Dani
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ReplyDeleteThese are so good!!!
ReplyDeleteBlack as night, black as coal... so good, Dani
Thank you! Now I just need to know if anybody else wants me to do a second part...
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